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How to Write a Congratulations Note
Recognition makes accomplishments even sweeter. Sending a few words of congratulation is like putting a little bit of sunshine in an envelope – it adds warmth to both business and personal relationships. Springtime brings natural opportunities to send good wishes for graduations and weddings, but there are many other milestones to celebrate as well.
· Business achievements:promotion, new job, new assignment, new title, starting a new business, getting a new contract or client, favorable publicity, industry award, retirement
· Personal achievements: graduation, academic awards, scholarships, college acceptance, successful speech or publication, winning a sports competition, receiving a prize, winning an election, joining a professional society
· Personal milestones: engagement, marriage, birth or adoption of child or grandchild, anniversary, baptism, circumcision, confirmation, Bar or Bat Mitzvah, new home.
Do
· Write soon after hearing the news
· Use the word “congratulations” early
· Mention the occasion for congratulations in the first sentence or two
· Tell the person how happy, proud or impressed you are
· If possible, relate something about the person's abilities and achievements
· If appropriate, tell how you learned about the news
· Express your best wishes for the person and for continued success
Don’t
· Tell the recipient he/she is lucky since it implies chance rather than achievement
· Use excessive flattery
· Compare the news to something you once did or heard about; let your recipient enjoy the moment
- Put a negative note into your message by using terms such as "you finally did it," "I'm so surprised," "you must have knocked yourself out."
The six elements of a basic congratulations note:
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1. Salutation
Many writers forget this, but people like to see their own names.
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Dear Mike,
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2. Offer congratulations early and mention the occasion
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Congratulations on your promotion to district manager
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3. Tell how happy you are
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I was thrilled when I heard the news!
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4. If possible, relate something about the person's abilities
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Ever since we worked together in Los Angeles, I knew you were one of the best - and I'm glad to see that your talent is being recognized.
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5. Send wishes for continued success
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Best of luck in your new position. I hope this is just the start of many more successes to come.
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6. Close
Any of the following are suitable for business:
· Sincerely
· Sincerely yours
· Cordially
· Best wishes
· Regards
· Warm Regards
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Sincerely,
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